I can see I am going to have to go on saying this. I first made the point on 4 April (see post), but it cannot be stressed enough. The first rule of good writing is clarity. In the light of that, I was distressed to see the headline above.
Having read it, are you confident that you know what it is that Chuck Hagel actually supports?
Having read it, are you confident that you know what it is that Chuck Hagel actually supports?
- Does he support cuts in knives, daggers and other sharp weapons in the sense of wanting to reduce their numbers?
- Does he support sharp cuts in weapons generally, from knives to bombs?
- Does he support cuts with sharp weapons, as opposed to blunt ones which can make such a mess in delicate surgery?
This headline, in today’s Moscow Times, is so loosely worded that you have to read the paragraph beneath it to find out what it is actually trying to say, which turns out to be none of the above! (see below).
I suggest it would have been better written like this: “Hagel Supports Deep Nuclear Cuts”. It is not that difficult to be clear.
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